Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Its a matter of time. Give it time. 








Sometimes you 'HAVE TO' settle with destiny's cards...



Even when you deserve more, and your conscience ticks you off a loser! You develop a hateful vehemence for yourself. Every passing second your world seems inching closer its end. 

Doomed, cracked into N pieces, smashed to smithereens, you do acquiesce to life's mockery. The dream you chased religiously drains you out of the last drop. For little you knew in the beginning the loss of it could be so devastating. 

Forlorn you remain, battling hard to prevent your worst fears stare you in the eye! You writhe in pain. You scream, shout; grapple to hold on...

Courage becomes a pretense when you long only for your time to come by!

Yeah 'Time'.

It hurts hard. It heals forever.





37 comments:

  1. Well...a rather 'not so' hopeful piece this time.In some parallel world,i would be writing my own destiny,breaking new grounds and running a race against time.It's all about subscribing to the brighter side of things ! Than succumbing to the 'not so bright' side ! Choice is yours :)

    If you can fill the unforgiving minute
    With sixty seconds' worth of distance run,
    Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it,
    And---which is more---you'll be a Man, my son!
    ~Rudyard Kipling

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    1. 'if' and 'sometimes', conditional syllogisms! And in any case, i didn't emphasize on servitude, but on the virtue of patience and composure.

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    2. @randomshouts - you must be appreciating her work instead of trying to be hyper critical

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    3. Hey Tanya! I' so overwhelmed by your concern. Can't thank you enough. But you're getting someone wrong. In fact, he's the best critique I have. Though don't miss out on an opportunity to pull each other's leg! Ha ha.

      Lotsa love to you, Tanya. :-)

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  2. Syllogisms are the worst literary decoys so they,most likely,deserve least credence ! But all in all,i do agree,it's the virtue of patience that you tried to bring to the fore..wish it were longer.I love/like/admire long posts,gives me time to put it all together.

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    1. I empathize. Wisdom follows it due course of time!!! ;-)

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    2. Thankfully,now you sound optimistic ;)

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    3. Its a matter of time. Give it Time.

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    4. hahaha...it's not a matter of time...it's a matter of what you choose to do

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    5. Yes! ...at a particular time! :-)

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    6. Don't let yourself fall victim to this inescapable vortex ! It's what we decide to do decides the time to do and not the vice versa ;)

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  3. noorin,most of your posts come at midnight just as i am about to sleep.but i lose track of time once i start reading your article.great post once again,all the best

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    1. Hey Thanks Tanya! And you know what, its 'Nooreen'! :-)

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  4. Whoa Whoa Whoa.....are you sad you wrote this ?

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  5. Hey Nooreen,excellent write up :))) i admire your english.you must start writing movie scripts now :) no,i am serious

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    1. Finally a comment from Aamli! And with this, my cheeks are going from pink to red. Blush! Blush! Blush! ;-)

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  6. hello nooreen..i'm kritika...aamli's friend.she referred me your blog.i went through all your posts and i'm really impressed by your writing.keep up the gud work.i'll keep visiting your blog.have bookmarked it.

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    1. Hey Kritika! Nice to know you.
      Thanks so much. U can become a member instead. U'll be notified about further posts by blogger itself.
      Keep reading till then. I have more!

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  7. Hi there.Just stumbled upon your blog and came across some rare writing,which you don't find very often.You have an exceptional acumen for writing.I admire that.Good luck

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    1. Thanks Anshuman. And since you said stumbled upon my blog, I would like to know how! :-)

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    2. Hey i'm Amit Srivastava's friend.Had heard praises from him.I used to run a blog sometime back.These days keep hunting for good blogs to read.And yours stands apart.Are you into professional writing ?

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    3. Oh! That's news. I'm so glad. And whats professional writing, I don't know. I'm a journalist though :-)

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  8. Hi didi.aapka blog to hit ho gaya hai.balle balle...waise ye wala article bhi bahut accha likha hai aapne...aise hi likhte rahiye didi

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    1. Hi P Singh ;-)
      Thanks for your love and appreciation. Feels so good.

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  9. Nice article dear :) you're a god gifted person..inshallah you'll rise high

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  10. Nooreen,that's a wonderful article.I'm reminded of my college days when i had such ups and downs.great article once again.

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    1. Thanks so much Sneha! I know how it feels.

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  11. Saumya SrivastavaFriday, 12 April, 2013

    Hey ! how did i miss this ? Wundrful article dear...you're improving your style and im loving it

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    1. Hey Hi Saumya. Long time! Thank you so much.

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  12. hmmm....someday i'll hire you to write a book for me :)

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    1. Ha ha! Awwww! Let's sign a handsome deal.

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  13. Nooreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennnn !!!!!!!!!!!!! WoWWWWWWW ! i have copied,pasted it into my computer.I prefer to use it sometime later.Am i allowed to do it ? :)))

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    1. Copyright is mine! Ha ha! And I love your comment.

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  14. Hello Nooreen,i'm abhishek....you write such a good english.you write better than the newspaper and magazine.god bless you.

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    1. Haan ji Goldi ji I know ke aap hi Abhishek hain! :-) THANKS FOR THE GOOD COMMENTS.

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